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docs/about-pvc.md

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 * Node hot add/remove from service (flush/unflush/restore) for maintenance
 * Automatic fencing of unresponsive node(s) and recovery of affected VMs (conditional)
 * Cluster maintenance state (allows monitoring/alerting pause while performing maintenance)
-* Includes Munin and CheckMK monitoring plugins
+* Included Munin and CheckMK monitoring plugins
+* External bootstrap system for low-touch cluster deployment
 
 ### Virtual Machine Management
 
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 * (For supporting VMs) Serial console logging with interactive follow
 * VNC console support with flexible listen directives
 * Simple resource management (vCPU/memory) w/restart
-* Hot attach/detach virtual NICs and block devices
+* Hot attach/detach of virtual NICs and block devices
 * Tag support for organization/classification
-* VM hot/online backup creation, management (delete), and quick restore to external storage
+* VM hot/online backup creation, with incremental image support, management (delete), and quick restore to external storage
 
 ### Network Management
 
-* Bridged (vLAN), Managed (VXLAN), and Direct (SR-IOV) VM networks
+* Bridged (vLAN), Managed (VXLAN, virtual), and Direct (SR-IOV) VM networks
-* Consistent network view (all nodes are provisioned with all networks) for Bridged and Managed VM networks
+* Consistent cluster view (all nodes are provisioned with all networks) for Bridged and Managed VM networks
-* DHCP, DNS, NTP, and TFTP for Managed VM networks
+* DHCP, DNS, NTP, and TFTP support for Managed VM networks
 * Upstream BGP for route learning for Managed VM networks
 
 ### Storage Management
 
-* Distributed & replicated storage backend (Ceph Object Store) with high availability and node-level redundancy
+* Distributed & replicated self-healing storage backend (Ceph Object Store) with high availability and node-level redundancy
 * Shared storage for VM storage volumes/virtual disks (Ceph RBD)
 * Integrated monitoring and alerting into PVC frontend
 * Zero-cost snapshots
-* Flexible replication conigurations for large or complex clusters
+* Flexible pool replication conigurations for large or complex clusters
+* Support for arbitrary data disk sizes (with limits)
 
 ### Provisioning
 
 * Integrated, highly flexible VM provisioning system
-* Define custom install scripts or use included examples for common OSes
+* Define custom Python 3 install scripts or use included examples for common OSes
 * CloudInit Amazon EC2-compatible CloudInit "userdata" support
 * Define dynamic VM profiles from component templates (system, network, disk), scripts, and userdata
 * OVA VM package support
+* Virtual disk import (raw, VMDK, qcow2, and others) support
 * Volume cloning support (cloning VMs)
-* Virtual disk import (raw, VMDK, qcow2, and others)
 
 ### Other
 
 * Free, Libre and Open Source (FLOSS) software
-* Written in modern Python3
+* Written in modern Python 3
 * Well-maintained and frequently updated
 
 ## Building Blocks